dailyderek's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Button of Destiny]

Thats Great!

Stickmen are awsome, why would you think people wouldn't like stickmen, anyways that was awsome lol best part was when his arms dissapeared and he went thorugh the boxy thingy.

[Cockatiel Flash 2!!!]

Well A Good Starting Point

If you watch almost any animator's first movie, it won't be perfect, your art is alright, you seem to have a good style you just need to work more on detail and the style's execution. One thing however, is you need voices I noticed in a review below your repsonse said you couldn't figure out where to put the sounds. If you still need help with that I can help, just say so in the response. And oter than that just keep working on flash!

[The Sun God]

lol hahahaah

woah that was awsome im a fan of your hills have eyes series too! great working, creepy but hilarious!

[Salt n Pepper]

wow, uhh that was "interesting"

uhh are you actually promoting people to not use salt? lol cuz if not i dont see much other point to this flash and hah sorry this is kinda mean but come on, WHO TALKS ABOUT THAT WITH THERE FRIENDS!? HONESTLY! LOL

anyways work on the art alot maybe give it some animation at least with tweens and really work on making the voices better anyway not too horrible for a first

[:the Composer:]

Woah That was Actually Pretty Good

I thought it would be dumb from the name and description, but I decided to give it a chane, now... I understand the hype!! This is great!

[The Hills Have Eyes]

WOW AHAHHAH

Lol That was amazing didn't make sense but made me laugh, good job!

[Liquid Swords Typography]

That's Epic!

That is awsome looks like a professionally edited video! Great WORK!

[Newgrounds Vs. Youtube]

lol very unexpected ending

didn't expect THAT to happen! good job! very intense fight scenes but the ending was the best part

[How I got my tablet]

Hah! That was pretty funny.

Hah! That was pretty funny. Good work on the comedy, voices are allright and art though, well to be flat out honest the art sucks, BUT just keep practicing your control, use layers and learn to use GRAPHICS, MOVIE CLIPS and FILTERS. Keep up the flash and you'll get it eventually! PS Much better than your Newgrounds Advert!

jinxworld70 responds:

Yeah, I really rushed that one.

[NG advert]

Meh, it needs Work

But it wasn't really funny at the parts that were obviously supposed to be comedic.
Also the voice acting needs work, but you seem to be on the right track, you may or may not have photoshop but it's extremley usefull at times, for graphics mainly as well as practice using layers and your control over the mouse. Keep working on it and you'll be good eventually! As for this flash, not so great. Sorry!

jinxworld70 responds:

thanks for the advice! I usually just do my drawrings in flash, but I'll do my backgrounds in photoshop next time. Thanks!