YES! AAHHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA OMFG
YES THAT'SEXACTLY WHAT I HAD IN MIND THOSE DICK HOLES ARE GONNA DO SOMETHING GAY LIKE THAT THEN CUT TO BLACK! IT WOULDNT BE THE SHOW LOST IF THEY EVER EXPLAINED ANYTHING! LOL I loved that great 3d animation, good 2d, and overall just funny. 7/10!
I'm all for artisitcs but,
I understand the style you're trying to get at, I'm not worried about the graphics being non human, but the animations are still choppy which is never good, if you smooth up that fbf the whole thing would look miles better. Secondly I thouhgt it was fairly short, and I realize a demo but with this length it's more like a teaser. One thing that kinda pissed me off was the key, why does everyone make keys look like that? (lol?) Hah, I know it's not anything big but every game uses keys like that and who in real life ACTUALLY DOES? LOL. In something non-serious it's kinda fitting cause that's an iconic key but since I've got a large feeling this isn't supposed to be funny or like light action, I'd change small details like that. For gameplay it's meh, choose your own adventures can be good and can be bad, always try to have a mix between the obvious answer being right and the not so obvious, but please dont make it random give hints in the scene which will kill you and which won't. I donno guess thats all I gotta say. I'll give you a six outta ten but probobly rate your full one a 7-10.
Thanks for the review :P - if only I could go back in time 7 years and tell my 16yo self what you just said
I'm not too found of tablets, they are made to simulate regular drawing but I think they fail in many ways. I am much more skilled at animating with pen and paper although it is a little inconvenient. I personally prefer pen and paper but I think if you're good with a tablet it looks more 'clean' and professonal. Your animation here was nothing too amazing but that special little bonus of having it done twice in different styles made it unique and memorable. Not gonna vote too high (sorry) but I think a 7 out of 10 is reasonable.
Thanks for sharing your opininon. Personally I like drawing directly on my computer, I save time (and paper); but the "feeling" of pen and paper is different, the animation feels "alive"...
BTW, the score you gave me is OK.
lol thats awesome
your spamming of my page pissed me off but i did enjoy this, thanks lol
It's not spam, it's a surprise mail ordered orgasm!
Not too Scary but yet still Good
It wasn't scary to say like it scared me but it had a very well done creepy and mysterious atmosphere. I loved the flckering dark screen, it really implied discomfort with the unerving shaking camera and the eiry alien noises. I think this film had great detail in the animation and my biggest problem with it had to be the ending was kinda goofy where he spat the and out his stomach and it made a farting noise. I just thought that kinda broke the mood. Maybe he as you implied is a zombie in response to other reviews and the ant is his only food in which him eating the ant shows desperation but the farting and wasting of the ant just seemed like the clown was getting a laugh out of it. Keep up the great work and hope to see more coming! :D
Thanks very much - and yeah I was wondering whether or not to include that sound, it felt like it needed something and I was pressed to think of anything else lol
Very well done Great Use of Resources
To summarize this, it was great, better than Larry 1, in fact to be honest I like the Normans as characters a bit better than Larry himself as well as I like this episode better. I don't know why I just don't really like the character of Larry. Anyway the animation was amazing and what I noticed with the background was you made the houses at two angles but copied and pasted throughout different ways, basically you don't put that much detail into every little thing but when everything comes together it looks good. One problem I noticed though is with the Normans and the gay guards guys (ugh that sounded like a bad pun but yeahh) is their chainmail armour seems to be a textured bitmap that you eyedropped and paint bucket so when their arms go up the chainmail is like the underneath of a flash mask and it looks kinda fake if you get what I'm trying to say. Basically it's like a chainmail texture underlays the entire movie and the arms are hollow but are masks to see the underlayer. I can't really explain better than that, oh well good movie overall! Hope to see more of the normans! :D
Seemed shallow at times,
I get that the sketchy style is on purpose, I do really but at times i seemed so sketch that I think you just rushed and it lacked effort. Some of the animation and the overall multimedia feel was neat but I think you needed to spend a bit more time to get my vote. I mean it wasn't bad but then there's always room for improvement. Oh and BTW I loved the variety of scenes.
it took me 7 months
Nice Short and Too the Point
Didn't actually make me laugh but was pretty good overall. Not bad my firend, not bad.
Wasn't funny in the slightest, missed the element of surprise the first gave and was overall less enjoyable. I dunno what to suggest just this felt like a sell out.
That was freaking amazing. Nice dude, smooth animation and good plot as usual. 10/10
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